Introduction
Our client brief was to create an adventure film that promotes adventure and encourages people to take park in activities within the National Park. For the project we needed to put all the skills we have developed so far into the film to produce what would’ve been an entry into SHAFF. The main idea was to have the film set in the Peak District because the film was to promote the peaks and the adventure activities within the Peaks. We started the introduction on the 14/03 and we then had until 16/05 to finish the project and do the post-production, the final deadline for the project to be complete is on the 10th of June. I made sure that I kept up with the work and didn’t fall behind with any of the deadlines, this helped me stay organised throughout. After pitching my idea to a panel my idea was picked and I was put into a group with Giz Emin and Georgia Trueman, we were each given the following roles: Georgia- Cinematographer, Giz- Sound Designer, Me (Hannah Walker)- Director.
Planning
I think the proposal went well, in the rationale I was able to talk more about the reasons and purposes that I wanted to create my film. I also spoke about what skills I have developed throughout this year and how I will use these skills to help me in my film, I then went onto talk about there being a gap in the market for my film and why my film should exist. The project concept I was able to talk about what my film was actually about and what my aims were for my film. I think that I was able to do this clearly and I got my point across well. After going into detail in my proposal and presenting my idea, my idea was picked to be made.
Doing the proposal helped me develop my initial ideas, it helped me think about more details and exactly how I want my film to go. I thought more about the plot an order of the film and shots that I wanted to collect. I also thought more about whether or not I was going to be the main character in my film. After writing my proposal I decided that I was going to be the main character in the film and I decided exactly how I wanted my film to go.
I think that my proposal helped me a lot with this because I was able to easily communicate my idea to the class and I was really happy with how my pitch went. If I were to complete my proposal again I would probably add in some screenshots of images and shots to give a better example of the sort of shots I wanted to put into my film. I did a lot of planing for my project and I think that it was effective because I did meet the deadline for this with some time to spare too. Throughout the unit I think that I would’ve managed my time better by making sure that the schedule that I created was more accurate rather than a rough version, this would’ve helped me become more organised to make sure that certain parts were finished by a certain date. I didn’t really face any problems with my planning other than when we first started the project I was stuck for an idea, to solve this I watched a range of adventure films and looked at what I could add into my film.
Research
I conducted a lot of research: analysed 2 video, looked more into SHAFF, did my own interview outside, looked into 3 existing adventure films and commented on codes and conventions in each, textual analysis, researched more about what a genre was, typical codes and conventions in adventure films, researched adventure film companies (3), created a mood board, I did 2 questionnaires (audience research), I looked into 3 Peak District websites, watched and commented on a short adventure film from you tube, I conducted some book research, I took a few images myself and commented as to why and I researched walks and places that I could go, on the trip. Most of the research I conducted was online however I did do some book research to make it more varied. I think that my research was effective as it helped my production run a lot more smoothly, I had a better idea of what I was working with and what I needed to do and look into before I started my production. With the research that I found, I made sure that I commented on each and stated as to why this would help me and my production. There were only a couple of problems that came up with my research, most websites etc were easily assessable and I was able to find out a lot of information easily. The first problems occurred when we did our own interviews outside, we had a lot of background noise so we did have to move around quite a bit to sort that out, to sort it out we did change were we were and also changed the audio levels so that the backing noise didn’t affect the sound of the speech in the interviews. The only other problems were that I didn’t get a lot of responses when I did the questionnaires and because the responses were limited the results weren’t as accurate however to overcome this I made sure that I did more that one questionnaire to make sure that I got a range of answers. I think that I would’ve made my research more effectively by making a list of what I needed to research before I started my production, I think that this would’ve helped me become more organised and know exactly what I would’ve needed to do rather than just finding certain things that I would need research and then researching them. I think that I did a lot of good research with a big range of different sources, gathering both qualitative and quantitative data- this helped me gain more accurate results throughout. I think that doing this amount of research did benefit me and my production as I found out a lot about adventure films and other things that I needed to know before filming. During production I did conduct some research about SHAFF just to get to know more about what SHAFF actually was, this helped me think more about whether or not I wanted to submit my film into the festival or not. The range of research methods I chose really helped me with finding a lot more information about the production and how I could make mine to a professional standard. It allowed me to gather a lot of accurate information from a range of sources. A few examples of my findings from conducting my research are: I found out what the typical adventure film codes and conventions are and how I could add these into my own film, I found out that there is a range of different types of adventure films and I also found out more about my target audience for my film.
Reflective Journal
I wrote a reflective journal each week to help me reflect upon what went well each week and what I could improve. The journals helped me a lot with planning out my work as I needed to think about what I would do the week after each blog and write a small summary at the end of each journal to keep track of my progress throughout the project. It also helped me with my research and actual production work, with the research I reflected on what research I had already conducted and what other research I could do. With the production it helped the reflect on what I could change and then I made changes to improve my work and develop my ideas further. Overall the reflective journals helped me a lot with organising my work and helping me make positive changes to my project to improve it throughout so I think that the reflective journals were very important for me to reflect upon how each week went for me and how I could improve on the following weeks.
The Product
I think that my production is fit for purpose it meets the client brief and it also includes appropriate codes and conventions for example: the main colours are green, blue, oranges, typical colours to expect in an adventure film, we also used fast paced rhythmic editing to the beat of the music, which is also expected in an adventure film to make it more interesting, and we also used a wide range of shots, we made sure that each shot was slightly different and we used a lot of different angles etc to create different shots. To improve the fitness for purpose I think that I would’ve shown more of the walks and the people who do that walks around the Peaks, maybe adding in a couple of interviews of people who go to the Peaks a lot, would’ve worked too. My role was director because my project was picked to be made, to fulfil this I made sure that everything was organised throughout the project and the crew members knew exactly what was happening and were prepared throughout planning and also when creating the project.
I was responsible for writing the script as director so I needed to make sure that the script got wrote properly to how I wanted my voiceover to go . I couldn’t write my script before the trip because the voice over was about how I felt on the trip and what I could see etc so after we came back from our trip, I wrote a script for my voice over. This was a very important part of my film, the audio was used to bring the clips together and tell the story to the audience. The script was important to communicate to my audience on a personal level so I needed to make sure that what I wrote made sense and worked well with the clips in the edit. Writing this script helped when recording audio, I was organised because I knew what I was going to say. I knew that the script that I wrote would match the video because I did a few run through’s reading my script out to the time of the video. I changed a few words and added a couple of sentences here and there to match the video better and to make it sound more interesting, for example I could’ve added more emphasis on each on each location’s names such as: Mam Tor. I think that the voice over worked well with my video because it linked to each part of the film but I also I liked the way my voice sounded the audio mix was done really well by the sound designer (biz) so it sounded really clear and crisp in the final edit.
I really like the final film and I am proud of me and my crew from how our edit has turned out, this was down to good communication. I think that the start of the film is really good, the name of our short film is aesthete and at the start there is a small opening about what the film is called and a small definition about what that word means which I think works really well, the transition from the start opening (text) to the first clip works really well too because it is very subtle but looks nice too. The go pro footage in my opinion looks really good, it gives the audience a personal link to the film and helps them feel connected to me (the character) throughout the journey. Some of the footage that we captured looks amazing and we collected a range of shots including: close-ups, wide shots, over the shoulder shots, establishing shot, pan etc. Having a range of shots helped a lot with editing because it really helped show off the Peaks from many different views. I have a few favourite shots, my first favourite shot is the go pro footage from when I was on Mam Tor, I believe that the footage looks really nice because you can see the real heights and the landscape behind me, the colours look really bright and eye-catching and I think that it also shows the feelings really well too because I was smiling and my body language showed that I was enjoying my time at the Peaks. This shot also linked to my voiceover at this point well too as I was talking about the views that were at the top of Mam Tor, and that is exactly what you could see in this shot, this provides anchorage. Another part I think works well is when you see me walking to the edge of Mam Tor and there is cuts in-between the walking, I think that it fits to the beat of the music really well and I think that the music complimented this part really well. The clips building up the beat worked well because the clips were matching in time to the beat of the music but also I think that when the beat dropped and the clip changed it looked really good. One of my favourite shots out of them all is the shot of Padley Gorge with the camera filter on, the pull focus makes it look really interesting whilst the filter makes the colours and the overall shot look really eye-catching and pretty. I really like the ending of the film because I think that it just works really well with the journey of me going to a from the Peaks, the clips show me leaving and walking back from Padley Gorge and then it shows a small part of the car journey through the go pros point of view. At the start of the film we used go pro shots of the car journey there and on the way back we used the same type of style using the go pro so I think that the ending concludes the film really well. Overall I think that the colour correction looks really good, the colours through out look bright and all of the same colour match for example the greens are all the same type of green with not really noticeable changes to the colour as it flows throughout. I am really happy with the music, the shots match the music really well as it is cut to the beat but I also think that the voiceover sounds good too. Personally I think that the film we created looks really professional and me and the crew have worked really hard on this film and I think it has paid off, we are all happy with how the film looks overall.
I think that the only thing I would change about the whole film would be the voice over because I think that I could emphasise a few words better when talking and I could also add in more emotion to my voice. I think that this would’ve improved my film for my target audience. Changing my voice over would have made the film work better overall however I am happy with how the film is now and if I do get time to re-record audio then hopefully I would be able to change this.
I think that the final film turned out really well and I am really happy with what we achieved. The film did fit the points made in the client brief and overall worked well to fit the brief too. The only thing that I would change about this production if I could would maybe be the type of music that we used I think we would’ve used a softer type of music rather than a loud upbeat tune. I think that the main things that I learnt was based on the physical part of the production, when shooting the project I learnt more about the effects that camera filters have and how to use a range of lenses to create a better shot. I also learnt a lot more about editing shots together as I was looking through what my cinematographer did and making changes with Georgia and also I had to do the same with the sound designer Giz so I learnt more about how to edit the sound to fit the music. There were no issues between the members of my team, we were good friends before the production so I was really happy to work with my crew on this production. I think that my film does appeal to the target audience because it is upbeat and catchy which appeals to the younger ages and the main character (me) is a young teenage girl (me) who goes on an adventure in the peaks so it fits the client brief well too. I did conduct some audience research by creating 2 questionnaires, the first questionnaire was mainly to find out more about my target audience and what they expect to see in an adventure film, this questionnaire gave me an idea as to what I could add into my film for example: camera shot types. The second questionnaire was mainly to find out what to put into my film for example one of the questions was “would interviews work well in an adventure film?”. This audience research has helped me a lot with generating more ideas for my film that will suit my target audience.
Before presenting our video to the class we created a questionnaire for everyone to fill in to give us feedback after watching the film. Here are the results we got from our questionnaire:
I am really happy with the results we got from the first question, we asked what everyone thought our target audience age range was and everyone who answered picked the correct age. This showed me that our film targets our audience age range well and its very clear who our film is aimed at.
We took into account all of the feedback that each person gave us in this section and it gave me a good idea of which parts appeal to my audience the most and which parts are the most appealing. Looking at this feedback also gave me an honest opinion of the overall audio that the sound designer Giz was in-charge of but also how the cinematographer did too.
After looking at all these comments with the crew we all took on board what they all said and made a couple of changes to the final edit. We made sure that the clips were cut to the beat more precisely, we changed the order of a few shots around so that there weren’t any similar shots that were close together and we also got rid of some clips that people said didn’t look too good. We went through the colour correction and made sure that it flowed throughout and didn’t look too harsh. The only thing that we didn’t have time to do was to change the voice over. If I had more time to do this I would’ve liked to have re-recorded the voice over to give it more emotion.
Every comment from this question was exactly what I wanted people to feel like after watching the film, all of the answers were positive and helped me know that the film we have created works well and effects my audience how I wanted it to.
Over half of the people who answered the questionnaire liked the song choice and even thought we only got 6 responses it gave me a good idea of what people thought about the song we chose to put into our film. I really liked the music choice and I think that the answers from this question proved that the music worked well with the shots in the film.
I am so happy with the answers from this question, we got equal amounts of answers for both “7” and “8”, personally I think that these scores are really good for our film. I am pleased with what our film looks like and getting high scores out of 10 from all 6 respondents makes me even more confident about our final film.
I think that the feedback we received from our class was really helpful, we got a lot of constructive criticism which has helped me and the crew make positive changes to our film to make it even better, I think that overall the feedback was very truthful as the class did tell us what they thought didn’t work well and what we could change to make it better. Overall the class thought that our final film was a 7/8 out of 10 which I am so pleased about as my crew worked really hard on our project.
I didn’t get feedback from an industry practitioner however this may have been useful for me to have feedback from someone who knows more about what a professional adventure film looks like, I would’ve contacted Matt Heason from SHAFF. The final film does adhere the media law and ethical guidelines I made sure that me and my crew did follow professional standards when creating our production, we made sure that the music we used in our film was copyright free and we made sure that we were allowed to use it in our production before we put it into our edit.
Conclusion
If I were to do the unit again I would improve my skills by:
To make improvements on my research I think that I would’ve put my questionnaires on more social media websites online to help me get more accurate results, overall I would use a wider range of sources: more books, more articles, newspapers/magazines etc.Personally I think that my planning skills were really good throughout the project however if I were to make improvements I would make sure that everything had more of a schedule and was more accurate to help me become more organised. I think that if I did the project again I would improve on my creativity by asking more people for ideas rather than staying stuck on an idea for a while, this happened a few times in my project when I was unsure on how I wanted a certain shot to be etc so I would defiantly ask for more opinions from other peers. I am really happy with how my final product however if I had more time to work on the project or if I had another chance to do it again, I would probably change the music that we had in the final edit: I like the song we chose however I would’ve chosen a less party type of song and more of a slow lighter song. I would also have chosen to edit my clips to the beat of a slower song so that the cuts from each shot weren’t as quick. Throughout the project there were a few problems that came up, however I think that they were sorted out pretty well, I made sure that the problems that did occur were sorted out quickly and safely. If I were to improve upon my problem solving skills I think that I could be more open-minded and not get too stressed out by problems the come up. I think that my communication skills throughout the project were very clear and straight forward, however to improve upon my communication skills (if I did this unit again) I would be more assertive with my crew and make sure they know exactly what we would be doing and make sure that they understand my ideas thoroughly.
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